Life

What a life... Its all luck...Its all luck..
More I try..More it sucks..

I wonder what to do..
How to make it work..
They say, hard work..hard work.
More i do, still it sucks..

I ask again..

What a life..they say
Its all luck..Its all luck..

Then i see others..
Seems like everyone struggles..
No one is happy with their lives..
They try more and more to thrive..
All are trying hard but still they sucks..
What a life..Its all luck ..Its all luck

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Poet Destroyer A

July 14, 2014 at 1:24 AM

Deepak, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Love Linda

Pandita Sietesantos

July 11, 2014 at 2:59 PM

Deepak, please accept my congratulations on a fine win! Wonderful write!

Faye Gibson

July 11, 2014 at 1:28 PM

Congratulations, Deepak, on your placement in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux

July 10, 2014 at 7:47 AM

You have expressed this perspective with great clarity and emotion. It is my hope that you experience a more meaningful perspective and discover the brilliance of your possibilities. I appreciate poetry that causes me to see beyond my own. Congratulations on your win.

Richard Lamoureux

July 10, 2014 at 7:43 AM

As I have traveled through life and it's many difficult paths I have determined my perspective has had more to do with my happiness than my circumstances. I wrote a book called "DUMMY Hurting and Healing Words" available as an e-book on Amazon.ca or Amazon.com. If you are interested search by author Richard J. Lamoureux.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 10, 2014 at 7:24 AM

Wonderful write Deepak! Live ur life ,, believe in urself ,, a bit disagree,, it can't be all luck,, but for poetic purpose! Congrats on big win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 10, 2014 at 5:33 AM

- Deepak, so sad ........... - "The highest happiness of life is the certainty of being loved for its own sake, or rather, to be loved despite the fact that you are who you are "a wise saying :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)