Life

Night moves over ocean
Vapor trails the sky
The moon sets full
then cuts in half
and stars fill the night
The forest is kissed
by the poring rain
and the smell
brings me back to
from where I came.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 28, 2016 at 9:23 AM
SHANE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 7, 2016 at 6:18 PM
Shane Smith, enjoyed reading your poem. Love **SKAT**
Sirak Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 8:19 AM
Stunning images here! This is an imagist poem at its finest.
Smith Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 12:40 AM
Oh wow! Thank you for that. Glad you liked it. I have only just joined yesterday so this is new to me as well. Really appreciate your feedback ;-)
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April 13, 2014 at 9:20 PM
I enjoyed your poem. Very well written. I am new to PoetrySoup. Find myself reading others poem and it is truly a joy. I found MY new home!!
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April 14, 2014 at 12:47 AM
Just found the reply button da!!
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