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Life

That moment
         When
         The soul
         Translates
Its
        Ethereal existence
        Into exploits
        Of the flesh
And intellect
       Erects
       A paradise
       In
The here-after..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/16/2013 8:43:00 AM
I like this take on life Gerald, and The here-after.. ending... :-) <---- :-) yes enjoyed the verse.... Linda
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Date: 9/12/2013 12:38:00 PM
Very nice Gerald... It speaks volumes.
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Date: 9/11/2013 6:52:00 AM
Interesting take on Life Gerald, quite enjoyed it. Ps: I wrote that poem you suggested on Adeus.. not sure if that is what you had in mind.
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 9/15/2013 12:20:00 PM
Thanks Wilma. I read your piece. Very good. Instead of adieu at the end make it adeus!

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