Life

sixty five plus years same old life different me

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Kash Poet

Date: 4/28/2012 12:29:00 PM

Yeahhh!!Good Senryu indeed!!

Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/28/2012 3:48:00 PM

You were my teacher on these little ones Charles taught me there should be an ah ha with these and you showed me that it could be 5-3-3 or 3-5-3 as well and a Senryu is just another form of Haiku. Thank you for being my muse. Huggs TLee

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 4/28/2012 12:40:00 AM

Great write!!! I enjoyed this much..

Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/28/2012 1:48:00 AM

With age comes change. I'm glad you enjoyed this one and think if you read the next in line you will not only enjoy but get a laugh. Thanks Elliott for your kind words. TLee

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/27/2012 10:23:00 PM

Lol..nice one..regards INK-U-SCRIPT

Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/27/2012 10:44:00 PM

I'm just havin a little fun tonight. Thanks hon May life leave a basket full of lol's on your doorstep. TLee

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/27/2012 9:54:00 PM

LOL...love it TLee...love it!!! deb

Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/27/2012 10:17:00 PM

It didn't quite say what I wanted it to but I am working on these little pearls. Thanks Deb Lots of Huggs.