Life

sixty five plus years
                                                         same old life
                                                         different me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 28, 2012 at 12:29 PM
Yeahhh!!Good Senryu indeed!!
Allen Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 3:48 PM
You were my teacher on these little ones Charles taught me there should be an ah ha with these and you showed me that it could be 5-3-3 or 3-5-3 as well and a Senryu is just another form of Haiku. Thank you for being my muse. Huggs TLee
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 12:40 AM
Great write!!! I enjoyed this much..
Allen Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 1:48 AM
With age comes change. I'm glad you enjoyed this one and think if you read the next in line you will not only enjoy but get a laugh. Thanks Elliott for your kind words. TLee
Ink-U-Script Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 10:23 PM
Lol..nice one..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
Allen Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 10:44 PM
I'm just havin a little fun tonight. Thanks hon May life leave a basket full of lol's on your doorstep. TLee
Burch Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 9:54 PM
LOL...love it TLee...love it!!! deb
Allen Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 10:17 PM
It didn't quite say what I wanted it to but I am working on these little pearls. Thanks Deb Lots of Huggs.
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