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Life

I live to die then, I die to live again


For David Williams' "Chiasmus Contest"
03/23/2012
6th Place Winner

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Nesma Alnsour

June 4, 2012 at 4:30 PM

Congrats on your win, Great Job!

Harry Horsman

May 20, 2012 at 3:57 PM

glad i've seen this Carol. harry

Taryn Thompson

May 14, 2012 at 9:05 AM

oh I lIKe THIS THANX for your comment!

Dalila Agtani

May 12, 2012 at 12:27 AM

Enigmatic monoku Carol. Like plants they die then live again when someone plants and nurtures their seeds. Love Dalila

Jasonpoet Boyd

May 10, 2012 at 4:18 AM

And they all said AMEN!

Chrysanthemum Flower

April 29, 2012 at 7:32 AM

It is short yet extremely thought provoking, i especially like the first line. hahahahahahahahaha

Bl Devnath

April 13, 2012 at 9:57 AM

Yes, my friend. Its the life we die and live with expectation. Lovely done, you are always genius. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

April 3, 2012 at 11:53 AM

yes..yes... Life... i want to live and live again... already read this one..but, oh well... twice would never hurt...always...pd

Jim Pemberton

April 1, 2012 at 6:51 AM

Congrats on your win! Good job! JP

Dinda Minardi

March 30, 2012 at 9:46 AM

Here is a winner! Congrats, Carol. A very deep poem in a line :)

M.I.A .

March 29, 2012 at 9:17 PM

Congrats on your win! what a profound monoko! love it

Poet Destroyer A

March 29, 2012 at 7:05 PM

Carol,, Congratulations with your wonderful win.. in David's contest..xox~PD

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

March 29, 2012 at 4:03 PM

Very nice Carol! Doing good. No internet so don't get to visit often. Thanks for all your support and for reading my material. Love always!

Ravindra K Kapoor

March 29, 2012 at 12:27 PM

Then the mind becomes an observer of human life, instead of confining to any one belief. Then thinking and words become a legendary symbol. So beautiful and meaningful are these words my friend. It is always a joy to read and to think over on such wonderful expressions. Thank you for your precious comments on my Poem. Love and best wishes always….Ravindra .....Carol Brown

Ravindra K Kapoor

March 29, 2012 at 12:26 PM

The beauty of these lines lies in the universal thinking of its beautiful writer 'Carol Brown'. These universal feelings come, when you start looking things from a lofty height. Standing on such a height makes your vision more broad and universal. Then you do not think and see things on the basis of caste, creed and religion, but you watch things in their true prospective, irrespective of time, place, nation and religion. continue on next....j46

Alexey Fedorov

March 29, 2012 at 12:00 PM

What is our life? Just 100 miles Which will we pass And call it life We have just time To solve all things When one is solved Next one appear We should rememeber Life is bridge And will pay For all our sins