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Life

I live to die then, I die to live again For David Williams' "Chiasmus Contest" 03/23/2012 6th Place Winner

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Nesma Alnsour

Date: 6/4/2012 4:30:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Great Job!

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/20/2012 3:57:00 PM

glad i've seen this Carol. harry

Taryn Thompson

Date: 5/14/2012 9:05:00 AM

oh I lIKe THIS THANX for your comment!

Dalila Agtani

Date: 5/12/2012 12:27:00 AM

Enigmatic monoku Carol. Like plants they die then live again when someone plants and nurtures their seeds. Love Dalila

Jasonpoet Boyd

Date: 5/10/2012 4:18:00 AM

And they all said AMEN!

Chrysanthemum Flower

Date: 4/29/2012 7:32:00 AM

It is short yet extremely thought provoking, i especially like the first line. hahahahahahahahaha

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/13/2012 9:57:00 AM

Yes, my friend. Its the life we die and live with expectation. Lovely done, you are always genius. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/3/2012 11:53:00 AM

yes..yes... Life... i want to live and live again... already read this one..but, oh well... twice would never hurt...always...pd

Jim Pemberton

Date: 4/1/2012 6:51:00 AM

Congrats on your win! Good job! JP

Dinda Minardi

Date: 3/30/2012 9:46:00 AM

Here is a winner! Congrats, Carol. A very deep poem in a line :)

M.I.A .

Date: 3/29/2012 9:17:00 PM

Congrats on your win! what a profound monoko! love it

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2012 7:05:00 PM

Carol,, Congratulations with your wonderful win.. in David's contest..xox~PD

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 3/29/2012 4:03:00 PM

Very nice Carol! Doing good. No internet so don't get to visit often. Thanks for all your support and for reading my material. Love always!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 3/29/2012 12:27:00 PM

Then the mind becomes an observer of human life, instead of confining to any one belief. Then thinking and words become a legendary symbol. So beautiful and meaningful are these words my friend. It is always a joy to read and to think over on such wonderful expressions. Thank you for your precious comments on my Poem. Love and best wishes always….Ravindra .....Carol Brown

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 3/29/2012 12:26:00 PM

The beauty of these lines lies in the universal thinking of its beautiful writer 'Carol Brown'. These universal feelings come, when you start looking things from a lofty height. Standing on such a height makes your vision more broad and universal. Then you do not think and see things on the basis of caste, creed and religion, but you watch things in their true prospective, irrespective of time, place, nation and religion. continue on next....j46

Alexey Fedorov

Date: 3/29/2012 12:00:00 PM

What is our life? Just 100 miles Which will we pass And call it life We have just time To solve all things When one is solved Next one appear We should rememeber Life is bridge And will pay For all our sins