Life

Life,
For some it can be a struggle each and everyday, others everything will just happen to go their way, In the end we are all going to die some of us won't even get the chance to say goodbye so cherish the moments good or bad and don't spend your life depressed or sad be happy and smile every single day before it's all over and taken away.

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rhaya artlyy

September 5, 2026 at 10:42 AM

I've really been enjoying your story your characters and storytelling are fantastic. Honestly, I think it would work incredibly well as a manga or webtoon and could help you reach an even bigger audience. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il: [email protected] inst@ akiraa_artly

Beata Agustin

January 11, 2024 at 11:35 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.