Life

Life, a shaking boat
in the ocean of living....

you alone can handle it.

when the shakes becomes overwhelming...

give some one your paddles...
and you end up 
up side down
in the ocean of living....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 10, 2016 at 2:03 PM
love the way you end the poem. SKAT
Ododo Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 2:03 PM
Thanks. I am grateful. Sorry for the late response.
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 7:55 AM
So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading this morning of both seasoned poets and new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Innocent. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
Ododo Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 2:02 PM
I am grateful. Sorry for the late reply.
Cooke Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 2:47 PM
intriguing write i like this. good poem
Ododo Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 2:00 PM
Thanks, with a lots of smile. Sorry this is coming this late. I am back here.
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