Life

Day quickly passes
And following by night.
Won't there be a time
When the world is slowing down?

Crowded and lifeless
I'm standing here, 
In a shiny town.
But why a part of me
Feeling sad and miserable.
Like a charming painting of life
Missing a line to complete.

Sitting on the train,
I look from my window
Wonder how life is,
Above all these structures.
Would it be a place
That full of hope,
Where nature is waving?
Or it just a kindergarden dream
That still alive in this modern world.

Dreamy but powerful
Like a print image inside my mind.
A beautiful piece of music
Joining up the soul of life.
It when things should stop,
Relax and wait.
For the moment of nature
Cover up the missing space.

A drop of water lands
Gently onto the ground.
A symbol, a signal
Of the brand new start.

Living above the busy town,
Is the world of peace and tranquility.

Calm and miracle,
A sweet lullaby sung into the air,
Whispering through the cracks of leaves,
To drive away the blue atmosphere
And replace by a joyful rainbow.
Craft an art of the mother nature
Calling and waiting for her children
To notice of what they've leave behind.
Yet, it is not too late,
There's still time for another change.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/29/2011 1:08:00 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Phuc. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
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