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Life Wtf Am I right am I right? Never knowing what's coming Or whether to duck Officially................WOW I'm aww-struck No said it was easy But they never mentioned it be this hard Yeah, I pray I pray to God everyday Some days.......all day I think he has more on his plate right now than me, You see Idk All I can do is lol as the wind blows Go with it but stay true about those Those those Optimistic goals They seem clear Just not close to here It's on the way thru trenches n Benches n Cannibalisyic presence Indescribable objection Derressed state of wtf next, .....then Days n night don't matter They just blend Til a curve ball blows up a cars rear end Yeah......... Grab the sledgehammer n break the walls down Bum rush everyone in the crowd Be defiant or die trying to achieve the real of a tyrant Believe What is last n precious Becuz its gone as the days are long N never Ever Forget a face.............Peace

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Date: 6/12/2011 8:46:00 AM
I like y0ur style an the way you think, Eddie. We may cause quite a commotion with the sledgehammer and the bum's rush, but in those last precious days we always want to find peace. Does "wtf" stand for "what then friends"? I'm not to up on all the abbreviations people use, but I did get the others in this awesome poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/8/2011 9:09:00 PM
Eddie...lol.. wow! what a way to express life... so true ! so true... now this was like awesome to read out loud... take care and thanks... for sharing,..Linda
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