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Life

Can you stop, or slow way down, life is fast, it makes you frown. Find your place, don't be left out, it won't last long, this life's bout. Take the time, he wants you to, whenever you can, Jesus is due. You will be blessed, for your love, believe in the son, he's up above. It's up to you, the door is open, forever your life, always spoken.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/18/2011 1:03:00 AM
COOL message, John. I dub you the inspirational poet.
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:26:00 AM
Bless you John. OXOX Anne-Lise - in winter Norway
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Date: 11/1/2011 10:04:00 AM
A message of faith and perseverance to lift the weary heart. Gives the reader hope John. :)
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Date: 6/29/2011 3:33:00 PM
John ,I think I've read your best then I read another one , inspration all over again . one of my favourites. Anne
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Date: 5/24/2011 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, John
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Date: 5/23/2011 3:19:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS ON FOR THIS POEM JOHN.......U REALLY DESERVED THIS ! I WOULD LIKE TO GIVE U 100|100 FOR THIS TAKE CARE.....SMRITI
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Date: 5/23/2011 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week John. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2011 4:31:00 AM
congrats on your poem being featured this week, well done...
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Date: 5/22/2011 9:45:00 PM
Congrats on this wonderful poem being featured brother:) I'm proud of you man:D
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Date: 5/22/2011 7:52:00 PM
Congrats John on your featured poem this week on P.S. great piece to share with us all my friend with luv...
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john aaron green
Date: 5/22/2011 8:10:00 PM
thank you so much i really enjoy p.s. and all the wonderful poems and poets, it is a great place to call home...
Date: 5/22/2011 5:01:00 PM
That is beautiful.And thank you for your kind comment...luv...Kacey
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Date: 5/22/2011 3:01:00 PM
A powerful write, and a good witnessing tool. Duality in it's finest:) Matt
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:36:00 PM
wise words John and such a poignant message within these lines so powerful ... so simple yet many make this road so tough to follow... for me it is easy luv.. enjoyed ...
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Date: 5/22/2011 1:49:00 PM
this was great!! nicely done. cory
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Date: 5/22/2011 1:47:00 PM
God is with you John ! Thats why u are able to create such a beautiful work from ur pen....this is very creative ! Redards
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Date: 5/22/2011 12:51:00 PM
Creative and interesting thoughts on life, john
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john aaron green
Date: 5/22/2011 1:21:00 PM
thank you, i love to share the lord when i can...