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Life

At times life can be so unbearable Like your already living in hell How you thought your life was getting so good that you were finally happy Everything then comes crumbling down to the ground Things you thought were only made up and could never happen All happen to you at once never taking a break in between You feel every rational thought in your mind leaking away Like there's no help for you like your gonna go crazy The tears you wont to just go ahead and come out wont It's building inside like a ticking time bomb waiting to go off Everything you've worked to get and to hold All of a suden disappears and leaves you with nothing but emptiness

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Date: 12/15/2010 4:53:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Shannon. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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Date: 12/14/2010 6:28:00 AM
This is a depressing but truthful piece well written. God Bless Taz
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