Life

At times life can be so unbearable
Like your already living in hell
How you thought your life was getting so good that you were finally happy
Everything then comes crumbling down to the ground
Things you thought were only made up and could never happen
All happen to you at once never taking a break in between
You feel every rational thought in your mind leaking away
Like there's no help for you like your gonna go crazy
The tears you wont to just go ahead and come out wont
It's building inside like a ticking time bomb waiting to go off
Everything you've worked to get and to hold
All of a suden disappears and leaves you with nothing but emptiness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 15, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Shannon. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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December 14, 2010 at 6:28 AM
This is a depressing but truthful piece well written. God Bless Taz
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