Life

Life is what I hear Life is what I embrace You have to face life head on Life itself is unfathomable Life is joyess yet sad During life you experience great triumphs and tragedies Yet no matter how great the tragedy, we always prevale over and past it We choose our own life and what path we take and live OUR LIFE by God throws obstacles at us but yet nothing that we can't handle So this is the end of this poem and all I have to say is live YOUR OWN LIFE TO THE FULLEST!

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Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/30/2010 1:07:00 PM

very nice write life is also what you make it well done and welcome to poetry soup have a great weekend faleshia

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/30/2010 9:12:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Zack. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Marii B

Date: 4/30/2010 12:16:00 AM

I agree(= good job

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2010 8:37:00 PM

life is precious no matter how we live it,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/29/2010 8:28:00 PM

Nice thoughts with good expressions