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Life

Like a maelstrom it imprisons In it’s cast iron grip Fighting is futile Escape impossible

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/15/2010 10:51:00 AM
wow this is great a perfect description of life, can't beat this! this is one of the best life poems i have read, oh! and i liked mind your head too. =) jo
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Date: 2/9/2010 1:04:00 PM
Joanna, making a bay is the easy bit, its the next eightenn years that are difficult. I am in a position to offer practical lessons in baby making, its long and hard but I think the efforts will be rewarded.
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Date: 2/9/2010 12:49:00 PM
this is a goood poem and it is really strong for the length , i think thats a gift, anyways good write,oh yeah and .....uh .... you gonna show me how to make a baby? lol =)
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Date: 1/6/2010 1:25:00 PM
Short and so powerful. Enjoyed this piece and have a great day. :):)
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Date: 1/6/2010 12:46:00 PM
We never know what life will give to us. We can seem to have it all in control and find out that we have no control. We have only a certain amount of control then the rest is life. Keep the creative pen flowing. May your gifts expand and touch on the lives of many in a positive way in the coming years . Sara
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