Jordan Wilson Poet I do not know?

Life

life is all we have 
love is what all we want
careness is what we need 
but i ask do you love your self 
care for your self 
life is what you make it
only you can make you happy 
but love is what everybody whats 
thats what i don't have

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Simone Segal October 28, 2009 at 1:55 PM Lovely poem, I believe to love yourself truly, is the greatest love of all, when we can do this, we can over flow with love for the world, and the world will love us back. lot's of LOVE Simone

John Freeman October 24, 2009 at 10:03 AM I like your personna "Love" Jordan you will go far in life with that type of attitude as God's love. Good job, Sincerely, Moses

Audrey Haick October 14, 2009 at 8:40 AM Hey Jordan, good poem! Everyone wants to be loved. That's true. I believe there's someone for everyone. We should not give up hope! Besides, the one who took the time to put you together loves you or he wouldn't have wasted his time! Peace, audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown October 14, 2009 at 4:44 AM Thank you for sharing your awesome write with us today Jordan. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick October 13, 2009 at 8:57 AM Interesting thoughts. Someone loves you and that someone is a friend that stickest closer than a brother. Keep writing. Sara