Life

Little moments; big ideas; grand schemes and flops!
Intimacies shared; secrets held; pennies saved in a box.
Friends laughing; enemies kept close; bills; brooms and Mops.
Every breath a different thing; a rose; a bird; or an Ox!
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Brown Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 9:59 AM
Here we are at the end of the week again. I am reading some excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Patricia. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 7:36 AM
This sums up my life too!! Excellent acrostic!!!
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 12:50 AM
Nicely written Acrostic. I love the thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
Jordan Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 9:29 PM
Patricia this is an excellent poem - Wonderful flow and Penmanship - God Bless, MJ
Beaudre Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 9:07 PM
This is wonderful, you really summed up the average person's life well!
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