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Little moments; big ideas; grand schemes and flops! Intimacies shared; secrets held; pennies saved in a box. Friends laughing; enemies kept close; bills; brooms and Mops. Every breath a different thing; a rose; a bird; or an Ox!

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Date: 8/21/2009 9:59:00 AM
Here we are at the end of the week again. I am reading some excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Patricia. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2009 7:36:00 AM
This sums up my life too!! Excellent acrostic!!!
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Date: 8/21/2009 12:50:00 AM
Nicely written Acrostic. I love the thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/20/2009 9:29:00 PM
Patricia this is an excellent poem - Wonderful flow and Penmanship - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/20/2009 9:07:00 PM
This is wonderful, you really summed up the average person's life well!
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