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For: The Life Acrostic Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Matt Caliri

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Live long and prosper* In spite of your death desire; Find the releasing pit, Empty your anguish into it. *Leonard Nimoy as Mr. Spock, Star Trek

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Date: 4/22/2024 9:48:00 AM
Your title drew me in. I really hope more people read this. There’s a lot of meaning in those few lines. I absolutely love this. Instantly one of my favs.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 4/22/2024 11:45:00 AM
Thank you. I suffered from depression for years. I could have used this advise back then.
Date: 4/18/2024 8:54:00 AM
better to release the anguish into some pit than let it sit in the pit of one's stomach. Nicely done. I liked it.
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Date: 4/18/2024 11:41:00 AM
It was a super fun little poem to write.
Date: 4/18/2024 8:13:00 AM
This is a good idea. I'll find a pit somewhere.
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Date: 4/18/2024 11:41:00 AM
Yep. It's all we can do sometimes.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things