Life

We are all living souls of earth, wind and fire - all life is a flame!

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Akkina Downing

Date: 9/1/2023 7:49:00 PM

Absolutely stunning!

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/27/2023 7:23:00 AM

Keith, your Senryu flickers with beauty!! Happy Sunday!

Ink Empress

Date: 8/18/2023 4:35:00 AM

Whoa, this is really soul stirring. “ wind and fire” “ all life is a flame” sadly quite literally it is , in some parts of the world today. And it can also be perceived in a different way but thats the beauty of words, how it takes you different places . This is a very beautiful senryu

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2023 4:15:00 AM

Creative one you have penned in this one. We are alive so I guess we are somewhat burning unless we have about burned out. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Tom Woody

Date: 7/20/2023 2:39:00 PM

Is this the kinder, gentler Keefer? These temps make me feel like I'm on fire. Fosho