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Life We question our existence Driven by Natures insistence That we all go the distance But we don’t know how Running around in circles Like a bunch of comic Erkles The dinosaur is purple But we don’t know why What are we becoming? The music starts humming The drummers are all drumming But we don’t know where Soon it will be over Lying in the clover Next to an old friend Rover But we don’t know when

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Date: 8/16/2022 10:06:00 PM
I must agree with Sara, I found your flow flawless. I truly enjoyed your poem, even cracking a smile when pondering the purple dinosaur. The title fits the end perfectly. Really enjoyed Donald.
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Donald Maher
Date: 8/17/2022 10:35:00 AM
Thank you kindly!
Date: 9/26/2021 10:05:00 AM
I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this one. I do believe that most never figure out why. You put it so well. Sara
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