Life

A line with an unknown end, A pleasing time to spend. A platform to make memories, A complete game of mysteries. A lovely car to design, A beautiful word to define. A painfull bed full of thrones, A path full of stones. A stage to display your best, At last you have to leave all the rest.

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Pratikshya Barik

Date: 6/28/2020 10:26:00 PM

The poem is very lyrical on its own. While going through a heap of stones, we may find the presence of moss which is very surprising on its own. Life always has a hint of inspiration among its obstacles which is why it is inexpressible. The tone of the poem is good. The journey has been penned effortlessly. Keep it up and welcome to poetrysoup.