Life

Birth
wandering earth
until I rest in dust
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Degenhardt Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 5:54 AM
This is short but my friend it really states so much about us in human form. Wonderfully thought out and penned. Michael
Strand Avatar
July 19, 2008 at 3:21 AM
Lovely senryu style haiku Cherilyn.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Jordan Avatar
July 18, 2008 at 9:04 PM
A very simplistic view of life yet it does say it all - blessings always
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