Liberty

She gasps still choking Bleeding justice follows them Darkness now bleeds lies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dufresne Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 7:17 AM
succinct imagery and personification,Tim. Darkness always bleeds and breeds lies.
Devonshire Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 2:52 AM
Lady Liberty must be choking considering the state of world affairs, Tim. Powerful haiku! Hope you'll consider writing something for my 9/11 remembrance contest. I know you can evoke a lot of emotion with your words. Excellent work here. Love, Carolyn
Sivey Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 6:10 PM
What a fantastic and moving poem! This poem says a lot in few lines! A wonderful write it is!!
Onclaud Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 12:21 PM
ohh, tim... compelling read with powerful lines and a strong statement...well done!:) huggs, nette
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