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She gasps still choking Bleeding justice follows them Darkness now bleeds lies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 9/19/2011 7:17:00 AM
succinct imagery and personification,Tim. Darkness always bleeds and breeds lies.
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Date: 9/12/2011 2:52:00 AM
Lady Liberty must be choking considering the state of world affairs, Tim. Powerful haiku! Hope you'll consider writing something for my 9/11 remembrance contest. I know you can evoke a lot of emotion with your words. Excellent work here. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/11/2011 6:10:00 PM
What a fantastic and moving poem! This poem says a lot in few lines! A wonderful write it is!!
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Date: 9/11/2011 12:21:00 PM
ohh, tim... compelling read with powerful lines and a strong statement...well done!:) huggs, nette
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