Liberated
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How time sheds your claws of deceit
From falsehood grating my vulnerability;
Yet I claim a self’s need to be: the rain freshens
New waves...bathing, exalting my authentic life
That dances through all veins within the marrow,
While I see my face emerge as a pink orchid
Allowing this heart to love my own essence:
Till the moon shines in these eyes… alive, liberated.
Laura Lou’s Quote Prompt II
11.26.2016
Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2016
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