Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

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Liberated

How time sheds your claws of deceit
From falsehood grating my vulnerability;
Yet I claim a self’s need to be:  the rain freshens
New waves...bathing, exalting my authentic life
That dances through all veins within the marrow,
While I see my face emerge as a pink orchid
Allowing this heart to love my own essence:
Till the moon shines in these eyes… alive, liberated.



Laura Lou’s Quote Prompt II
11.26.2016

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Ralph Sergi December 22, 2016 at 11:54 AM Congratulations on a beautiful emotional poem and HAPPY HOLIDAYS, nette!

Charlie Smith December 19, 2016 at 11:43 AM Excellent Nette, congratulations...

Kai Michael Neumann December 18, 2016 at 3:08 AM Pink orchid, great. Congratulations on your win. Kai

Afzal Nusker December 17, 2016 at 11:31 PM Astounding!!! I simply love it. Congrats, Nette.

Richard Lamoureux December 17, 2016 at 3:14 PM One of my favourites! Hugs Rick. Congratulations.

Janis Medders Tobechi December 17, 2016 at 1:53 PM Great write with lovely images. Congratulations.

Darren White December 17, 2016 at 1:39 PM Wonderful, Nette. Awesome, everyone already said it, so I just say: Congratulations :)

Anu Nayak December 17, 2016 at 12:31 PM woW!!!! This one is a winner for me, heart loving its essence, self love!!! absolute freedom like a bird! Congrats on your top win dear Nette, love, Anu:)

Beautiful Scars December 17, 2016 at 11:55 AM Dances through the veins of your marrow- love that line, thank you and congrats :)-luloo

Alexis Y. November 26, 2016 at 11:53 AM Hi Nette, You got another "WoW" coming. Outstanding write. A without seven doubt: -) Alexis

Arthur Vaso November 25, 2016 at 9:23 PM Wow simply wow!

Noel Onat November 25, 2016 at 6:10 PM I respect people who know when to give and when to hold back!Your true value shines through this honorable poem!

Rhoma Em November 25, 2016 at 5:56 PM This eloquent poem on self-esteem allows me to to stand on a strong footing in the rock face of a drained relationship's unsteady climb! Bravo!

Tim Smith November 25, 2016 at 2:19 PM Such a beautiful poem nette...love the pink orchid line

Chris Green November 25, 2016 at 2:16 PM Absolutely beautiful Nette, this one had me smiling as I read it. Good luck in the contest.