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Letting Go

Am I losing my mind?
I feel like I am
My body wants to cut loose
and be free…
My heart begs for passion
and wild abandonment
but…
my mind screams
BE CAREFUL
I want to just let it all go
and
forget about my morals
and 
lust without restraint
To experience wanton
Ecstasy 
without consequence
and…
my conscience

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/31/2013 9:32:00 PM

It seems like you wrote this poem with 'wild bandonment'! You want to do everything Christina LOL! With a poem like this, I think we here at Soup will need to keep an eye on you....:D MC

Christina Holmes
Date: 11/2/2013 3:56:00 AM

Lmbo...my desires are in check MC...don't worry.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2013 12:55:00 PM

- A very good and deeply moving poem Christina ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Christina Holmes
Date: 10/23/2013 9:30:00 PM

Thank You!!

Susan Palli

Date: 10/23/2013 12:31:00 PM

Prayer is the way to go to fight temptation! Good write!

Christina Holmes
Date: 10/23/2013 12:33:00 PM

Yes it is. Thank you Susan.

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/23/2013 1:21:00 AM

Hi Christina, A truly heartfelt write.. Ken

Christina Holmes
Date: 10/23/2013 12:29:00 PM

Than you Ken.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/22/2013 10:35:00 PM

We all have feelings, but we have to be sure and be careful so we won't regret it later. Thanks for sharing ... Lucilla

Christina Holmes
Date: 10/23/2013 12:31:00 PM

Thank you Sara.

Christina Holmes
Date: 10/23/2013 12:30:00 PM

Thank you Lucilla.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/18/2013 4:35:00 PM

We are all tempted from time to time..Saying no shows strength of character but makes for a great topic for a poem..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Letting Go

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