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Letting Go

yielding shackles bound creates unsteady ground toxin crafts its mark defeat painted dark anguish, fury, sorrow, pain mood brands a barren stain clinging to injured emotion is a threatening devotion affliction I may not survive however, I have not felt more alive grappling with feelings, bigger than small is better than feeling nothing at all as much as I would like to defend I know deep down this must come to an end numbness will overtake me slow it is the price I pay for letting go 2012/04/02 CONTEST - Letting Go - Lisa Hiatt and CONTEST Heroic couplets - Craig Cornish

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Date: 4/9/2012 4:29:00 PM
Wow. This is profound and revels quite interesting images. Very nice! Always, Laura
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Date: 4/7/2012 7:36:00 AM
love this piece - many congrats on your wins, my friend. ah, you're vie's daughter - i thought there must be a family connection
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:18:00 AM
congrats Diana on a wonderful win for letting go luv... amazing one..
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Date: 4/5/2012 8:05:00 AM
wow!!!!!!congrats on the placement in the "letting go" contest......~sashi
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Date: 4/5/2012 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Lisa's "Letting Go" contest Diana-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:49:00 AM
Diana-Marie heart felt words, good luck..hope you and your mom are entering my contest, go on it's a challenge..David
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Date: 4/2/2012 4:59:00 PM
Tears at the heart with every line , best of luck in the contest Diana- Marie Hug , Declan xxx
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