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Letting Go

Another year nebs by zero As empty gardens gate outflux By delusions picket, white and wooden Lined long sidewalk memories crooks Bits of heart still scattered amidst the grass Cross seasons, forever weathered change A tear, a leaf ...a flake always fall away Like you, the sapor in my life astray Deep within me somewhere still You so much, siphon off my energies To waste and wither in each of waking days Teetering upon the edge, thus living off of fantasies Puddles in my dreams, kept upon my nighttime pillow From where I stand wishes within the day, and wait Onto worn tiles intimate below my peering window Outside, "Dead End" a road sign reads, and in my mind... down a one way street

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/29/2012 4:50:00 PM
Btw. I didn't even place in the contest lol oh well
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Date: 4/29/2012 4:45:00 PM
Very good piece. Your poetry stands out all by itself. Your friend Michael.
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Date: 4/27/2012 3:39:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Michael. Enjoyed you poem - you make the most mundane things sound very romantic. Cheers, Maureen
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Date: 3/31/2012 7:13:00 PM
I especially like the third stanza for it hold so much truth..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
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