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Letting Go

not so much anymore,not so much right at the door,not so much a you and me ,not so much we wernt ment to be...a mistake the act that took place when i saw your face wasnt fate but disaster with lives at steak..you could be more then you chooz to be,you could be more but you wont thats why you no longer see me,you did this but go on blame me...just a broken path leading me to places ive longed to see.but if not for you id never known the strength with in to start agian..i wish i could atleast call you freind,i dont hate you thou maybe i should...if you would please just go away its to painfull to watch as you destroy yourself.its not these words you should fear its your chance at life and how your simply watching it disapeer....

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Date: 5/5/2016 3:08:00 AM
desi clausen, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. --SKAT
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Date: 4/22/2016 10:57:00 AM
Desi, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/11/2011 6:26:00 PM
nice expressive narrative, desi
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Date: 7/10/2011 2:08:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoy the site and its many features as u continue to share words with luv... wonderful write...
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Date: 7/10/2011 8:32:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Desi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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