Letting Go

not so much anymore,not so much right at the door,not so much a you and me ,not 
so much we wernt ment to be...a mistake the act that took place when i saw your 
face wasnt fate but disaster with lives at steak..you could be more then you chooz 
to be,you could be more but you wont thats why you no longer see me,you did this 
but go on blame me...just a broken path leading me to places ive longed to see.but 
if not for you id never known the strength with in to start agian..i wish i could 
atleast call you freind,i dont hate you thou maybe i should...if you would please just 
go away its to painfull to watch as you destroy yourself.its not these words you 
should fear its your chance at life and how your simply watching it disapeer....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 5, 2016 at 3:08 AM
desi clausen, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. --SKAT
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April 22, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Desi, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv ~LINDA~
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July 11, 2011 at 6:26 PM
nice expressive narrative, desi
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July 10, 2011 at 2:08 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoy the site and its many features as u continue to share words with luv... wonderful write...
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July 10, 2011 at 8:32 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Desi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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