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Letting go

I feel empty, but sane A flower surrounded by rain Lost in my mess of thoughts From all the sayings I've been taught 'Life gives you lemons, Make lemonade.' But just like me, the flavor will fade 'Patients is the key to greatness.' But I've been waiting, yet I'm still filled with loneliness My life is boring and bland I just need someone to give me a hand To guide me through this ruff reality And maybe help me gain some popularity But no one will come save me Because to save me it cost a fee One no one is willing to pay But whatever, it's all ok Soon I'll be truly free And I'll be lost in a light, made just for me But soon, is not soon enough Because I'm too cowardly and stuff I don't want to give up and die No need for me to live in the sky Maybe if I wait long enough It will all come back by Right?

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Date: 1/31/2024 7:03:00 PM
My diagnosis is self pity. My recommendation for recovery: Get actively involved in doing good for others less fortunate. You can thank me later
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Date: 1/31/2024 7:13:00 PM
i appreciate the concern, but i am not writing this for personal purposes. this is just what i enjoy as a poet, the light and the darkness that follows. i am just on the wrong sometimes.

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