Letting Go

on return from cremation - they dropped the urn with my ashes

shards punctured remains - I would have the last laugh at my farewell

memories down the drain - at least I knew where I was going


21st May 2020

Let the Pens Flow - Sijo Poetry contest

Sponsor Jenish Somadas
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Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 6:40 PM
oh my, a tragecomedy. I LOVE this. Congrats on the great win.
Mishra Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 6:51 AM
Words from a visionary. Congratulations on your win Kai :)
Somadas Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 12:44 AM
Great Sijo Kai..at least I knew where I was going..so subtle and profound..Congrats..
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