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Letter Old Fashioned

If I have the time I'll write a letter old fashioned and serene

Hand crafted silk coated paper from my smouldering memory box

Let time stand still switch of the phone and turn back the clocks

Caress my pen and stroke the message to give it some sheen


As if on its own the quill releases memory gaps at the court of kin

Scratches the bottom of an ink pot in weary calligraphed weeping

Pauses for smudged words and tackles guilt which was sleeping

Uncensored and honest it resists to crumble the pages into the bin


Sentences assemble under an onslaught of consciousness' streams

Clouds of doubt loom large and write over the margin at both sides

Why on earth did we have to argue so much in belligerent nights

Until exhaustion won the battle of opinions and unfulfilled dreams


I'm not convinced any longer we strove for truth decisive and brave

Egos hindered a more peaceful exchange of generational disputes

Grounded in self-righteousness that poisoned love at vulnerable roots

Today I mourn those wasted moments and post an apology to your grave



26th December 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/12/2020 2:22:00 PM
wow, Kai, this is one of the best ones on the winners list. Love this. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 1/12/2020 1:08:00 PM
Hi Kai, I really enjoyed your well written write. Your old fashioned undertones were on point. Congrats on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/12/2020 5:51:00 AM
Kai, congratulations on your winning placement with your heartfelt poem!
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Date: 12/26/2019 2:55:00 PM
Wow, I was taken high and brought low, then humbled. This was truly well written. A marked piece to be made a fav in my book, grateful for the addition and the chance to read it's quality. Merry Christmas and God give you a peaceful and safe New Year. Ann
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/27/2019 5:11:00 AM
Thank you Ann. I appreciate that. Death affects us greatly, all through our lives. And we should tackle it head on, otherwise there will be a collision ...
Date: 12/26/2019 8:08:00 AM
we always regret those words we did not say, especially when it is too late...deeply emotive poem.. nothing hurts like lost love...
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/27/2019 5:04:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. Graves are forever but at least we can mourn ...

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