Letter From Parents To Son-In-Law


If parents were to write a letter to son-in-law what would they say?
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Her laughter
like burbling waterfall 
should gush down forever from within

Her trusting
nature like blowing winds
should trust endlessly without betray

Her dreams are
bright, tender like flowers.
Help her realize them. Don't crush them.

Her feelings
of love, serving like tree,
reciprocate with love and service.


24th February 2021

Contest Winner images in parallel - 1st place
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Delaney Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 10:12 AM
This is a lovely one, Rama: Congratulations on your win. SuZ
Balasubramanian Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Thanks. Take care, God bless!
Seeker Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Superb! Congrats on your win, with this beautiful poem!
Balasubramanian Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 11:40 AM
Thanks seeker. Take care, God bless! Rama
Daniel Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 2:13 AM
This is so nice and unique, I agree with Paula:) great write, Rama, congratulations:)
Balasubramanian Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 3:06 AM
Thanks for the wonderful comments. They make my day. Will surely make a card of it. Take care, God bless! Rama
Goldsmith Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations on your win. This wonderful write could be put in a card. All parents should give this letter to the soon to be son-in-law. Have a blessed day/week......................
Balasubramanian Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 3:04 AM
Thanks for the wonderful comments. They make my day. Will surely make a card of it. Take care, God bless! Rama
May Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 5:10 AM
Very nicely done Rama, Congrats on your win
Balasubramanian Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:07 AM
Thanks for the placement. Take care, God bless! Rama
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 6:45 AM
Good advice for anyone in a relationship. ;0)
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:56 AM
Thanks.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:17 AM
Very well conceived, Rama.
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 10:21 AM
Thanks. Not sure I am correct or not. Take care, Rama
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