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Labyrinthine, Languish, Letter Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 11/05/23

Fiction poem

Letter

A letter was pushed through my door The writing I’d not seen before On the envelope it said ‘For Sue’ Written in red not black or blue I opened it as Sue’s my name Such vitriol meant to defame But why had it been aimed at me I just moved in just after three The nature of the letter left me shaken And I truly don’t like confrontation There’s a knock at the door, I open it But step back, afraid I may take a hit A lady said, “I moved out yesterday Please pass on any post my way” I said, “Tell me are you called Sue A letter came, I guess it’s for you.” I retrieved the letter from the bin Sue read it much to her chagrin She said, “It’s from my evil Ex I ditched him, life is so complex” Sue came in and we drank tea She had the same humour as me Since then we became firm friends So this is where the story ends
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Goldsmith Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Letter" is a wonderful story/write with a great ending. Have a great day............
May Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 2:19 PM
You tell the story well Jan, Congrats on your win
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 8:47 AM
- A lovely story...she needed a friend...congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Bowring Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:00 AM
What a great poem dear Jan. So well written - great flow and rhyming. Always love a happy ending and I’m glad they become good friends with the same name too :) Very clever! Good luck in the contest. Hugs and smiles to you xx :):)
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Pure fiction, but stranger things have happened I guess:-) hugs jan xx
Kauffman Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Truly words matter. They can be used to slash the heart or, in this case in the end, bring two strangers together in an atmosphere of compassion and solace. This is so beautifully written, Jan, and very timely for me. Sending you blessings and my gratitude.
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 2:22 PM
thanks so much Sam:-) hugs Jan xx
Proxenos Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Co-incidence, a serendipity of events which brought the two of you together so that you could become good friends. Not like my friend I had from our Zambian days for 6 years. We exchanged news both of us married with one child, and photos until I mentioned we were coming to England on holiday and we would make a point of visiting her area/town, would be great to meet . We would book into a B&B close by. This happened 7 years ago and to this day have not had a reply. hugs and blessings Jenn.
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 2:22 PM
oh how odd is that Jennifer, thankfully this is just a pure fiction poem:-) hugs jan xx
Buhagiar Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:24 AM
A lovely ending to the two Sues. May your friendship last. Blessings.
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 2:21 PM
pure fiction thankfully Victor:-) hugs jan xx
Peranteau Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 4:34 PM
thaaaannkfully, the fear you trapped me in, ended dear poet! (i wuz waiting for the cops to come ;) thanxxjan Much love, james
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 4:36 PM
thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 11:34 AM
you've told this story in such an intriguing way, jan! i'm so glad it worked out the way it did for both "sues." best of luck in the contest!
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 1:47 PM
I never know what will come from my pen:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 9:07 AM
Great poem, heartfelt. Good luck in the contest. Enjoyed reading my friend. Stay safe have a nice weekend.
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 1:47 PM
thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 7:00 AM
I'd change the locks Jan or is it Sue lol. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 8:54 AM
shh dont tell them about my alter ego lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 4:21 AM
Just love this. Awesome write, tale. Love to you and prayers too, Gina
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Regina, I was unsure what to write then this idea came to me:-) hugs Jan xx
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