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Labyrinthine, Languish, Letter Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 11/05/23

Fiction poem

A letter was pushed through my door The writing I’d not seen before On the envelope it said ‘For Sue’ Written in red not black or blue I opened it as Sue’s my name Such vitriol meant to defame But why had it been aimed at me I just moved in just after three The nature of the letter left me shaken And I truly don’t like confrontation There’s a knock at the door, I open it But step back, afraid I may take a hit A lady said, “I moved out yesterday Please pass on any post my way” I said, “Tell me are you called Sue A letter came, I guess it’s for you.” I retrieved the letter from the bin Sue read it much to her chagrin She said, “It’s from my evil Ex I ditched him, life is so complex” Sue came in and we drank tea She had the same humour as me Since then we became firm friends So this is where the story ends

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Date: 11/10/2023 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Letter" is a wonderful story/write with a great ending. Have a great day............
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Date: 11/9/2023 2:19:00 PM
You tell the story well Jan, Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/9/2023 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/9/2023 8:47:00 AM
- A lovely story...she needed a friend...congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs
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Date: 11/9/2023 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/8/2023 10:00:00 AM
What a great poem dear Jan. So well written - great flow and rhyming. Always love a happy ending and I’m glad they become good friends with the same name too :) Very clever! Good luck in the contest. Hugs and smiles to you xx :):)
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Date: 11/9/2023 2:23:00 PM
Pure fiction, but stranger things have happened I guess:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/6/2023 10:53:00 AM
Truly words matter. They can be used to slash the heart or, in this case in the end, bring two strangers together in an atmosphere of compassion and solace. This is so beautifully written, Jan, and very timely for me. Sending you blessings and my gratitude.
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Date: 11/9/2023 2:22:00 PM
thanks so much Sam:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/6/2023 8:33:00 AM
Co-incidence, a serendipity of events which brought the two of you together so that you could become good friends. Not like my friend I had from our Zambian days for 6 years. We exchanged news both of us married with one child, and photos until I mentioned we were coming to England on holiday and we would make a point of visiting her area/town, would be great to meet . We would book into a B&B close by. This happened 7 years ago and to this day have not had a reply. hugs and blessings Jenn.
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Date: 11/9/2023 2:22:00 PM
oh how odd is that Jennifer, thankfully this is just a pure fiction poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/6/2023 1:24:00 AM
A lovely ending to the two Sues. May your friendship last. Blessings.
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Date: 11/9/2023 2:21:00 PM
pure fiction thankfully Victor:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/5/2023 4:34:00 PM
thaaaannkfully, the fear you trapped me in, ended dear poet! (i wuz waiting for the cops to come ;) thanxxjan Much love, james
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Date: 11/5/2023 4:36:00 PM
thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/5/2023 2:06:00 PM
clever creation, Jan. I appreciate the intrigue and mystery with the surprise ending. Nicely done, Jan. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 11/5/2023 4:36:00 PM
Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/5/2023 1:46:00 PM
Clever piece; plot twist poetry, JA. :o]
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Date: 11/5/2023 1:47:00 PM
yeah no poop for once AP lol x
Date: 11/5/2023 11:34:00 AM
you've told this story in such an intriguing way, jan! i'm so glad it worked out the way it did for both "sues." best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/5/2023 1:47:00 PM
I never know what will come from my pen:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/5/2023 9:07:00 AM
Great poem, heartfelt. Good luck in the contest. Enjoyed reading my friend. Stay safe have a nice weekend.
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Date: 11/5/2023 1:47:00 PM
thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/5/2023 7:00:00 AM
I'd change the locks Jan or is it Sue lol. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 11/5/2023 8:54:00 AM
shh dont tell them about my alter ego lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/5/2023 4:21:00 AM
Just love this. Awesome write, tale. Love to you and prayers too, Gina
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Date: 11/5/2023 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Regina, I was unsure what to write then this idea came to me:-) hugs Jan xx

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