Let's Waltz One Last Time

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as trickles hum to glossy oaks and skies--- come waltz me in the symphony of rain enshrining charms adored .... though moon decries love gone: just let night’s movement whirl again. Taken from the poem 'Final Dance'

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Carole Duet

Date: 5/24/2019 3:29:00 PM

This reminds me of the famous song, "Singing in the Rain" with Gene Kelly singing and dancing. Just delightful, Nette. Congrats on your 1st place win.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/2/2019 1:15:00 PM

Simply enchanting is the sounds of rain you have captured in this lovely poem Nette. Congratulations on your first place win! : ) xxoo

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 5/2/2019 9:35:00 AM

Beautiful and wistful, Nette. Congrats on your win.

Lyric Man

Date: 4/25/2019 10:00:00 PM

Love may have fled but in this moment, from the outside, it looks, sounds, and feels new again.. and perhaps one hopes love will see it, hear it.. feel it again. Your pen drips thoughts that linger long after the poem, and waltz, have concluded. Nette, your romantic energy sparkles!