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Let's Waltz One Last Time

as trickles hum to glossy oaks and skies--- come waltz me in the symphony of rain enshrining charms adored .... though moon decries love gone: just let night’s movement whirl again. Taken from the poem 'Final Dance'
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Duet Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 3:29 PM
This reminds me of the famous song, "Singing in the Rain" with Gene Kelly singing and dancing. Just delightful, Nette. Congrats on your 1st place win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 1:15 PM
Simply enchanting is the sounds of rain you have captured in this lovely poem Nette. Congratulations on your first place win! : ) xxoo
Cozart Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 9:35 AM
Beautiful and wistful, Nette. Congrats on your win.
Man Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 10:00 PM
Love may have fled but in this moment, from the outside, it looks, sounds, and feels new again.. and perhaps one hopes love will see it, hear it.. feel it again. Your pen drips thoughts that linger long after the poem, and waltz, have concluded. Nette, your romantic energy sparkles!
Michael Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 5:16 AM
"come waltz me in the symphony of rain" I like this line...
Goff Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 5:03 AM
Filled with light & love, nice, Nette!
Lindley Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 2:43 PM
Awesome poetry my dear friend. Its depth of beauty awes me to my old poet's core... A gem and a wonderful fav..
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 4:44 AM
You picked a perfect stanza that stands alone as a poem Nette. I am sure Greg will love this one! Beautiful! : ) xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 10:40 PM
Lovely, nette. A FAVE for me.
Kiser Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 2:42 PM
This is beautiful; leaves one with a great image; good luck in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 1:29 PM
- Beautifully written, Nette :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 12:52 PM
Breathtaking! You are always good in the poetic game Nette
Cunningham Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 12:30 PM
May I have the pleasure nette. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Pandit Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 12:25 PM
Enjoyed the rhythm of this final dance..great choreography in your words, as always, Nette. Best for a win.
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