Let's Waltz On

a
spin in
a 
spin out
of motion
brings a 
change 
in the 
seasons of
planets and earth
time is a
flowing
stream 
no two 
moments are 
the same
let's
all waltz 
on



Date: 11.6.2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 18, 2015 at 1:04 PM
Mohan, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 11:27 PM
I like how you made this about the earth!! Congrats for your win.
Merryman Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 9:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest, Mohan! I like your metaphor of time being a flowing stream. Well done! Love, Kim
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 5:10 AM
'no two moments are similar '- oh how true and once they are gone we will never have them again - oh how time passes by so quickly:-( good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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