Lets Toss Heads Or Tails

indifference flows parallel to our concerns truth lies in between By David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 11/26/2020 11:49:00 AM

50 / 50 On the Turn of a Coin

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/26/2020 12:50:00 PM

On the fense in the middle its a tenable position. It's a running theme i take through out all of your poem's Shows your willingness to be flexible and admit if you are wrong. It's called humility and sadly resides above and below middle

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/26/2020 12:34:00 PM

Thanks Christopher, spin is the intended message here, I always try sit back and analyze not jump to conclusions just because the spin doctors say it’s true, hence the final line is myself, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/26/2020 11:57:00 AM

Then it's over and up to you To decide which version of the truth you wish to choose. So good David it deserved a 2nd read and comment

Silent One

Date: 11/17/2020 2:56:00 AM

Indeed... Three sides to every story..

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/17/2020 3:03:00 AM

Always silent one, the coin is in the air in this one, but four sides I think, truth and lies on the bottom line, thank you so much for looking in cheers David