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Let's Start a New Poem

Let's start a new poem
should we focus
or should we roam
a forest, a breeze,
 a lake, or some trees, 
words, or birds ,
rumors or  humors
abstract ~ concrete
 pink,  red roses
or hymn to a beat
rainy day or sunny heat
children playing~ flowers swaying
So far... my list of stock
to unlock this writer's block.

Copyright McCuen 2009

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/23/2009 1:42:00 PM
I think the block is unlocked!!! Great poem, so clever and one we can all relate to! Nice Work! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 3/23/2009 1:18:00 PM
Very cleverly done and it shows how poets do ponder a bit on there subject of choice! And writers block faces us all at one time or another Great write! Laura :)
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Date: 3/22/2009 4:20:00 PM
You know, sometimes the just write it as you think it poems end up pretty great. So, not bad for writers block, which I doubt you really have considering all your postings I see!!! Thanks for your comments. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/22/2009 1:20:00 PM
aww a good write, so many things to write about there, a friend of mine said all my poems have a similar run through, some said make them into songs well my everyday poems on another web site I use. write what comes in your heart it flows so great and so true that way, anyway I enjoyed this poem God bless from diane
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