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One false move, with one short breath, opening my soul, to someone i trust, telling him all, that matures to me, thinking its okay, we are meant to be. Not knowing the truth, that hides behind that smile, should have known better, but i was in denial. His soft sweet lips, his beautiful eyes, full of compassion? NO! full of secrets and lies. Thought i found love, my heart is such a fool, you broke me apart, that really isn't cool. I'll move on though, you cant keep me down, the bittersweet game of love, you were just another lost round.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/12/2012 4:20:00 AM
Amanda, enjoyed your poem. I see you must be new at p soup, welcome. I am new,too. Hope to read other poetry by you. Be sure and read other's work and they in turn will visit you. God Bless, Avis
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Date: 1/31/2012 7:07:00 AM
It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Amanda. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol
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Amanda Turnure
Date: 1/31/2012 3:11:00 PM
:) I do read the other poetry! I love reading it. This site is awesome!