Let's Fall In Love

If ever you’re giving your heart away,
I'm first in queue.
If ever you’re ready to surrender to love,
I will submit with you.
If ever you want to conquer mountains of destiny,
I will climb with you.

I see divine tendencies in you,
let me submerge in it.
Unburden your fears, 
show me your vulnerabilities
don't remain taciturn
We can unpack together. 

I feel your soul,
It illuminates my darkness.
Let’s fall in love fearlessly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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J.T. Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 7:16 PM
a very emotional write, well done -JT
Cee Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 3:57 AM
Thank you so much. Your feedback is much appreciated and means alot.
Michael Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 5:21 AM
That's a powerful little poem...It happens anytime the heart speaks...I like the sincerity of expression...All the best Bhavini
Cee Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Hi Michael, I really appreciate your feedback, it's very encouraging and motivating. All the very best to you too Kind regards Bhavini
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