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Lets Face It

When I'm ready to take my last breath you will be standing next, supportin' me. My last breath will be the hardest for him because he let me down and now you're around supportin' me. He couldn't meet no one like me but to your advantage that's a different story.. Oh how its sad to face reality, you are gone forever and now I have someone else supporting me. You have your girl, and that's not my problem. Let's face it.. when you used to like me you had no one else to pick you off the ground. Which is funny for me Now I'm just laughin' because this 'sob' story is another sad love movie. SAD LOVE STORY that you never wanted. Not even with me. -Alley

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Skat A

Date: 11/29/2014 10:32:00 PM

Alexandria, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Alexandria Palms
Date: 11/30/2014 9:01:00 AM

Well I am 14 years old. I'm in ninth grade and I have many passions but one I love most is poetry, I started in about third grade and all (at that time) I knew how to write was, for example: A frog hopped on a log, he was a bog. Only because I was so young I didn't understand how to ACTUALLY write poetry. Ha. But as I started practicing more I realized the more greater ones came from what I was feeling then and there!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2014 6:19:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Alexandria - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Alexandria Palms
Date: 11/30/2014 9:03:00 AM

Yes this website and the people on it are very encouraging! I absolutely love this opportunity I have with being able to show people and write to people my poetry!