Michael Jordan Poet Couplet

Let's Churn Some Butter

Just as butter is made my churning cream
Light that love and churn that dream

Churn it till it’s smooth as can be
Then generously spread it all over me

Roast me, toast me then throw me in the pot
Crank up the heat because I like it hot

No need to time it so lets explore
Churning our dream till we can churn no more

The longer we churn the smoother the cream
That’s what makes us a perfect team

Each forever willing to do our part
To churn our dream with all our heart

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John Loving Iii September 5, 2008 at 6:58 AM my grandmother used to churn milk every day, very rarely have i thought of it this way. way to go mike! JHL

Krislyn Panugayan September 1, 2008 at 5:15 AM Wow! This is a cute poem! I like the rhyme and the comparison... it melts my heart.... Take care!

Tony Hwilka August 27, 2008 at 7:49 PM A fine poem to practice friendship, marriage, etc. Thank you for your comment on Road to Alaska.

Carrie Richards August 27, 2008 at 6:26 AM I really do love this one!....Just terrific! One of my favorites!.....Blessings...Carrie

Vince Suzadail Jr. August 26, 2008 at 9:00 AM Great outlook. Keep churning. Vince

Michael Degenhardt August 26, 2008 at 5:07 AM This has such a smooth and fun beat to it. The couplet form offers a lightheartedness to the read as the content as well, through great imagery, does the same. Very well written my friend and never stop sharing. MIchael

Brian Strand August 26, 2008 at 1:55 AM Like the kyrielle touches in this one Michael.Rgds Brian and thanks for your very welcome commnts and interesting observations

Marilyn Hernandez August 25, 2008 at 11:46 PM haha! I really love this one! It made me 'hungry' for more! I love the imagery you created with this one. Great write! Oh yeah, thanks for your comment too...and by the way...cool name!

Cassidy Loy August 24, 2008 at 12:16 PM Interesting. It was really great. I wasn't sure what to expect when I saw the title, but I was pleasantly surprised. Well done.

Laura Mckenzie August 23, 2008 at 7:31 PM Michael Very interesting new write I love it! Laura :) I'm churning for your talent!!

James Foulk August 23, 2008 at 4:55 PM yes very creative, really enjoyed it. so warm and tender and peaceful to read. Michael you to kind on your comments, but they do encourage me to keep going. thank you for reading my doggie's little dream and for your comment.

Sharon Winter August 23, 2008 at 4:47 PM Clever and creative Michael. Different for you. Loved it. Love, Shar

John Tanaskow August 23, 2008 at 11:48 AM sometime just sometimes it fell like forever dosn't it

Heidie Buys August 23, 2008 at 11:28 AM Wonderful way to look at it. Very creative and a pleasure to read and savor. Well done. Regareds Heidie

Kareem Musa August 23, 2008 at 9:36 AM I had been patiently awaiting your next poem. And you did not disappoint.

Ronald Bingham August 23, 2008 at 9:27 AM This one is quite unique I like the comparrison, Ron

Adell Foster August 23, 2008 at 8:01 AM LOL, Write On Michael, I wrote a piece a while back entitled "Task of Sweet Butter" your title drew my attention :-)However, that's some powerful butter churning, the imagery and flow of the read is dynamic in every aspect my friend. Makes for a happy camper, Thanks for sharing and your supportive critiques. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell