Let's Bang-Bang and Bong



When I strike the strings and music flows
Words drizzle while standing in meadows
Nobody around, but I hear the crowd
Hays bang their heads, bow and cheer aloud

A Rock-star, I feel, within again
Here, nobody lies and none to feign
Telling stories of life through my song
So, come on dears! Let's bang-bang and bong


10.02.2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 5:07 AM
Ignore the comment below Bobby they are always so negative. Yours is the first poem I've read on the rock style of music and this makes it stand out from the rest of the poems I've read:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Tagore Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 9:10 PM
Thanks dear Jan for your visit and wonderful comments. You got it right. But, I always welcome criticism. If I couldn't connect even a single person, my write won't last long. So, I write and write and write... Haha! Hugs, Bobby
Damstrom Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 10:41 PM
This is great, thanks for sharing this
Tagore Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 8:45 PM
Thank you Chris for your lovely comment. Happy to hear that it could connect you. Warm regards, Bobby
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