Lethargy

Put in lethargy
Weakness stupor sleepiness
No energy left

Russell Sivey

lifesadsenryu

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Gwendolen Song

March 24, 2012 at 2:16 PM

A fine mixed drink you have concocted here, Russell..don't stir it tho...you might fall down!...(Is this a hint you need to sleeeeeeep more? ha ha. Gwendolen

Joann Grisetti

March 24, 2012 at 10:13 AM

This was me yesterday. Hope you recover quickly and have energy to kep writing.

Doris Culverhouse

March 23, 2012 at 3:12 PM

me too....I need an electric shock therapy!!

Carolyn Devonshire

March 23, 2012 at 2:31 PM

This is exactly how my medications make me feel, Russell. It's also a goo description of one who suffers from depression. I want to thank you for always being so kind to me. You know I am struggling with an illness and still you stay my friend. You're aces with me, "Rusty." Love you, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 23, 2012 at 1:19 PM

Small and sweet poem Russell. Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

Jack Horne

March 23, 2012 at 11:29 AM

well described, Russell

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

March 23, 2012 at 10:13 AM

enjoyed this sweet write..inducing sleep, jag

Charmaine Chircop

March 23, 2012 at 9:51 AM

A very nice senryu Russell.. Much enjoyed-Charma

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 23, 2012 at 7:56 AM

I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Russell. Love, Carol