Letdown

Blow out the candles
make a wish, say a prayer
prepare for letdown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 6, 2013 at 11:13 PM
a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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June 22, 2013 at 3:16 PM
Well said Breath in the warm air (from the candles) Curse the fools and thank god he doesn’t exist !
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