Brian Strand Poet Verse

Let Yourself Go a Surreality

come to the beginning
                a vague     riddle
                an open obfuscation
                with
                    little context
         the who     what     when   how

primitive themes
                   of the unconscious
                   preoccupations
                      with the misshapen
              changed
                 no longer lucid
vaporous
        designed to
                         surprise   provoke

floating glimpses
           bizarre    twisted
                             tentacles
       unsettling    juxtaposed
in
   miniature
               doodles&
                       swirls

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Eve Roper March 31, 2020 at 12:16 AM I feel like I'm in a dream with just partial visions or scenes then it is over. Brian Strand March 31, 2020 at 2:55 AM Thanks Eve,you captured the surreal.Your support to all my endeavours is much valued.Cheers