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Let Your Love Touch Me

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  the sunset kiss along a lullaby moment, holds my being in absolute bliss,
in such a way that i shall never forget, for i can feel my heart whispering this
                           oh yes,
     the soft echo of your name with mine, such love tangling feels divine

      - i love the way your thoughts tassel through my flowing hair
                   like the calling of the falling wind, over and over again - 




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 a romantic scribble
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Callus Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 2:50 AM
Wow! This is beautiful and captivating, Brandy. An extravaganza in a mere 6 lines, especially the end couplet which begs to be read over and over again :) ~ May you enjoy a lovely and romantic weekend, my friend. // paul
Nicole Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Dear Paul, my heart smiles when I see a comment from you. Sometimes, less is so much more. You and your beautiful thoughts are appreciated. My weekend was nice, tender and romantic. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Raynes Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 6:04 AM
Thoughts falling through hair... super sensual. Your writings are something else Brandy, i wish i loved like that again.
Nicole Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Awe, Lewis- "let love touch you- everywhere" :) I am sure it will. Thank you for your kind words. I am smiling. :) Brandy
Watt Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 1:02 PM
I love the use of all the soft words to establish a sense of tenderness: "lullaby", "whisper", "echo", "flowing hair", "falling wind". Such a delicate and lovely piece. A fav! Hugs ~ John
Nicole Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 2:25 PM
Thank you for placing this in your favorites. So kind of you. Oh my!! Yes, these words caress moments that are wrapped in love. Indeed. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. For leaving your thoughts upon it. :) Brandy
Wolves Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Lovely indeed, sigh, you write divinely. Just so you know I changed my name from Robert Maguire to RunningWolves. Sorry if this has caused any confusion.
Nicole Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 4:09 PM
You haven't caused any confusion. I like that name. "Running Wolves" Thank you for all your kind words and compliments. I appreciate you reading my poetic whispers. :) Brandy
Hill Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 2:44 PM
Just wonderful!! TAH
Nicole Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 9:33 PM
Thank you Tobey! So kind of you to read my poetry. :) Brandy
Proxenos Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 1:01 PM
Your romantic scribble is a beautiful poem Brandy, a passionate, sensuous and somewhat erotic write, but simply awesome! Hugs, Jennifer.
Nicole Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 6:35 PM
Dear Jennifer, your thoughts always bring a smile- because you can feel every moment within my poetry. I appreciate you. Such a wonderful comment. :) Hugs, Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 8:24 AM
I enjoyed these passionate prose. “oh yes” indeed.
Nicole Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 1:41 PM
Thank you Rick. Now you have me saying "Oh My" :) I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy
May Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 7:32 PM
I love the last 2 lines of this beautiful write Brandy...
Nicole Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 8:33 PM
Thank you Joseph. :) Always a joy reading your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Warrior Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Will you stop! calling these scribbles...they are much much more than that Brandy...they are more like 'etchings of love' lol...sending etching equipment...^WW^ :o)
Nicole Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 11:22 AM
:) Scribbles are moments from my heart. More like whispers of love that linger within. You are so sweet my Warrior with Wings! You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
One Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 3:31 AM
Love that imagery, from the first line... wow... if we did a collab, i think the whole of poetry soup would blush lol...
Nicole Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 11:09 AM
Awe, thank you Silent One. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your thoughts make me smile. :) Blush too. I am sure Poetry Soup would as well. Who knows. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy
Michael Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Enchanting...I'm under the spell of your words...very good one Brandy
Nicole Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 8:07 PM
:) Under my spell are you?? Bcharmed. This is my username on my website. Thank you Arturo. I appreciate your wonderful comment. ~ Brandy
Krutsinger Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:41 AM
A delicate gorgeous write, that made my heart a bit lighter.
Nicole Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:46 PM
Thank you Caren. Love will lift the heart even higher. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:28 AM
This is beautiful, B, so tender and romantic, a soft kiss as the sun is setting, hearts tangling together as one. You have such a romantic heart my sweet friend. All my best. John
Nicole Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:43 PM
It is the thought of love being so close. In these words from my heart. Thank you John. Yes, I am a romantic. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:03 AM
Sunset kiss can do that every time...enjoyed reading about the romantic scene you painted, Brandy. Lovely lines: the soft echo of your name with mine...the calling of the falling wind, over and over again. There is more to this story...
Nicole Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:41 PM
There is always more- when caressing moments of love through poetic whispers. Thank you Vijay. I appreciate you leaving your kind words upon this little scribble of mine. :) Brandy
Kaya Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 3:51 AM
Wow! This is beautiful.
Nicole Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:38 PM
:) Thank you Byron. So kind of you to say. Just a little romantic scribble from the heart. ~ Brandy
Gauthier Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 11:07 PM
Absolutely lovely, Brandy.
Nicole Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Thank you Line. My best to you my dear friend. :) Brandy
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