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Let Your Love Touch Me

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  the sunset kiss along a lullaby moment, holds my being in absolute bliss,
in such a way that i shall never forget, for i can feel my heart whispering this
                           oh yes,
     the soft echo of your name with mine, such love tangling feels divine

      - i love the way your thoughts tassel through my flowing hair
                   like the calling of the falling wind, over and over again - 




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 a romantic scribble

Copyright © Brandy Nicole | Year Posted 2019

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Paul Callus Date: 8/29/2021 2:50:00 AM Wow! This is beautiful and captivating, Brandy. An extravaganza in a mere 6 lines, especially the end couplet which begs to be read over and over again :) ~ May you enjoy a lovely and romantic weekend, my friend. // paul Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 8/30/2021 7:04:00 PM Dear Paul, my heart smiles when I see a comment from you. Sometimes, less is so much more. You and your beautiful thoughts are appreciated. My weekend was nice, tender and romantic. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Lewis Raynes Date: 3/14/2020 6:04:00 AM Thoughts falling through hair... super sensual. Your writings are something else Brandy, i wish i loved like that again. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/14/2020 1:44:00 PM Awe, Lewis- "let love touch you- everywhere" :) I am sure it will. Thank you for your kind words. I am smiling. :) Brandy

John Watt Date: 12/26/2019 1:02:00 PM I love the use of all the soft words to establish a sense of tenderness: "lullaby", "whisper", "echo", "flowing hair", "falling wind". Such a delicate and lovely piece. A fav! Hugs ~ John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 12/26/2019 2:25:00 PM Thank you for placing this in your favorites. So kind of you. Oh my!! Yes, these words caress moments that are wrapped in love. Indeed. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. For leaving your thoughts upon it. :) Brandy

Running Wolves Date: 12/16/2019 3:32:00 PM Lovely indeed, sigh, you write divinely. Just so you know I changed my name from Robert Maguire to RunningWolves. Sorry if this has caused any confusion. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 12/16/2019 4:09:00 PM You haven't caused any confusion. I like that name. "Running Wolves" Thank you for all your kind words and compliments. I appreciate you reading my poetic whispers. :) Brandy

Tobey Hill Date: 8/21/2019 2:44:00 PM Just wonderful!! TAH Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 8/21/2019 9:33:00 PM Thank you Tobey! So kind of you to read my poetry. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 8/2/2019 1:01:00 PM Your romantic scribble is a beautiful poem Brandy, a passionate, sensuous and somewhat erotic write, but simply awesome! Hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 8/2/2019 6:35:00 PM Dear Jennifer, your thoughts always bring a smile- because you can feel every moment within my poetry. I appreciate you. Such a wonderful comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/31/2019 8:24:00 AM I enjoyed these passionate prose. “oh yes” indeed. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/31/2019 1:41:00 PM Thank you Rick. Now you have me saying "Oh My" :) I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Joseph May Date: 7/30/2019 7:32:00 PM I love the last 2 lines of this beautiful write Brandy... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/30/2019 8:33:00 PM Thank you Joseph. :) Always a joy reading your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior Date: 7/30/2019 8:51:00 AM Will you stop! calling these scribbles...they are much much more than that Brandy...they are more like 'etchings of love' lol...sending etching equipment...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/30/2019 11:22:00 AM :) Scribbles are moments from my heart. More like whispers of love that linger within. You are so sweet my Warrior with Wings! You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Silent One Date: 7/30/2019 3:31:00 AM Love that imagery, from the first line... wow... if we did a collab, i think the whole of poetry soup would blush lol... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/30/2019 11:09:00 AM Awe, thank you Silent One. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your thoughts make me smile. :) Blush too. I am sure Poetry Soup would as well. Who knows. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael Date: 7/28/2019 1:00:00 PM Enchanting...I'm under the spell of your words...very good one Brandy Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/28/2019 8:07:00 PM :) Under my spell are you?? Bcharmed. This is my username on my website. Thank you Arturo. I appreciate your wonderful comment. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/28/2019 7:41:00 AM A delicate gorgeous write, that made my heart a bit lighter. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/28/2019 7:46:00 PM Thank you Caren. Love will lift the heart even higher. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

John Gondolf Date: 7/28/2019 7:28:00 AM This is beautiful, B, so tender and romantic, a soft kiss as the sun is setting, hearts tangling together as one. You have such a romantic heart my sweet friend. All my best. John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/28/2019 7:43:00 PM It is the thought of love being so close. In these words from my heart. Thank you John. Yes, I am a romantic. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit Date: 7/28/2019 7:03:00 AM Sunset kiss can do that every time...enjoyed reading about the romantic scene you painted, Brandy. Lovely lines: the soft echo of your name with mine...the calling of the falling wind, over and over again. There is more to this story... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/28/2019 7:41:00 PM There is always more- when caressing moments of love through poetic whispers. Thank you Vijay. I appreciate you leaving your kind words upon this little scribble of mine. :) Brandy

Byron Kaya Date: 7/28/2019 3:51:00 AM Wow! This is beautiful. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/28/2019 7:38:00 PM :) Thank you Byron. So kind of you to say. Just a little romantic scribble from the heart. ~ Brandy

Line Gauthier Date: 7/27/2019 11:07:00 PM Absolutely lovely, Brandy. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/28/2019 7:32:00 PM Thank you Line. My best to you my dear friend. :) Brandy