Liam Mcdaid Poet Narrative

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today's world has become so cruel against honesty 

it draws to me something biblical out from the old testement 

honesty has no rights under the worlds peers 

justice has become poor in value when it upholds law 

supporting the darkside of humanity unthinkable has begun its reign 

Let Us Begin Instructing the Ignorant

To speak a truthful opinion correctly dressed
attacked by false faces clearly visible hate
trying to shut down facts crying victim's
Judgemental liars falsely claiming right's
let's look into your heart and see who pulls the strings
Firstly you support human sacrifice
from there on in everything uttered is cornered
becoming a lost cause when it boils down to lecturing
shape shifting words that overturn
the righteousness of our cause and beliefs

Worthless views push agendas overshadowing the truth
then with branding irons enslaving good values
biting with venom hook line and sinker
taking a back seat as you begin war cursing honesty

This battlefield lawless in its behavioural patterns
accuses those caring virtues of being on the opposite side of the coin tossed here where wisdom holds ground
when clearly they are spinning out of control
condemning those of us trying to save them

This split in the tongue clearly is trapped morally corrupted
begging your forgiveness under blindness
take a long hard look in the mirror reflection bitterness
we are all sinners at the end of the day
a firm purpose of amendment brings you closer to the light

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Funom Makama October 15, 2019 at 11:55 AM A true testament of your faith, intertwined in the mastery of ambiguity. I love your expressions and how they flow with the meanings crawling out after a second read. Great work my friend.. I have been going through your works today, its really exciting.

Regina Mcintosh October 15, 2019 at 10:20 AM Wow... A thought provoking write. I love the Lord with all my heart and, from what I read, believe you do too. That's a blessing to me... God bless you always with love in Christ, Gina

Sandra Adams October 15, 2019 at 9:18 AM very powerful words falling from your pen my friend...very well crafted :) hugs

Vijay Pandit October 15, 2019 at 9:03 AM Another powerful write from your talented pen, Liam..you know your words.. and they rush to your cause..kudos for the intensity of your write.

Dorian Petersen Potter October 15, 2019 at 7:28 AM Hi Liam!:))A very true,powerful poem, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Abortion is murder!Sadly, we're living in very ungodly, evil,corrupted days!Lots of hate everywhere!All so sad!But with God have Love Light Salvation!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:))Lets pray more for all, especially all the ignorant and the lost!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + 7+7!A fav !You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Remember the Lords always with you no matter what!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^