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Let the Light Shine

When the birds stop singing When the world stands still, Then your life is nothing, But a bitter pill. Even though they smile at you It is just a ruse All they really want to do Is use and then abuse. Nowhere to turn to Nowhere to run. No-one who cares enough To come here with a gun. My life is often wretched No future left for me The path that I should follow I only wish they’d see. Let the light shine, shine, shine, LET IT SHINE.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/2/2014 4:04:00 AM
Excellent portrayal of hopelessness and then a solution! Loved it
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Date: 2/25/2014 6:57:00 PM
out of the darkness comes light and the light shines out from this awesome ending. Stay strong my friend, Jan x
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