Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

Let Roll a Straight Stick

let roll a straight stick
                                 with unwarranted thread of 
                                     bad synthesized will
              
                                   stick neither gets bend
                                 nor broken after long time
                                  but thread gets perished

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Skat A June 5, 2015 at 1:34 AM BL, this is a very deep senryu. I enjoyed Bl Devnath June 5, 2015 at 7:08 AM Thanks a lot for stopping by on my poem, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl