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Let Not Time Dim the Silver

A red rose on the page of my age imitating the dance of morning wind, as it ripples my spirits in waiting Smell the breath of youth and pass it unto her the light of time for when yours dim you shall enjoy hers, glowing on a sun-kissed stone Carve love that you’ve never tried freeing it, from the pocket of your thoughts on this red rose, longing for a grasp ‘Tis alone wish of a lonely heart and if the wind can hear it... why can’t you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/12/2009 4:52:00 PM
This is a tour de force, this is beauty, you have captured the temporality of the absolute.
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Date: 1/25/2009 12:46:00 PM
Beautiful writing here, E ... I'm not familar with this form at all and now I'm curious ... smile ...
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Date: 1/24/2009 10:28:00 AM
Very beautiful poem Ernesto Especially the end of it
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