Let My

Let my lungs stop
Let my heart seice
Let my blood drain out of me
And set my soul free
Free from the pain & sufering
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 6:04 AM
Thank you for starting my week out with some excellent reading Joanie. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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November 16, 2009 at 6:06 PM
Nice Poem...Marty
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November 16, 2009 at 5:53 PM
I've felt this way before, and you've captured the feeling beautifully------Ell
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