Let Me Take You

Let me take you into the rains which stream into my heart
Show you the lightning flashing in my veins
You can listen to the thunder as we stand a world apart
Then I will bring you inside me
To remain

Inside of me you will find the silence of hills and valleys
Places you can wander in peaceful bliss
But you will still see that lightning flashing wildly
Hear crashing thunder in the magic
Of my kiss

You can tell me about the rains that stream into your heart
Show me the rocky mountains in your eyes
Together we will stand watching rain clouds part
As the lightening in our veins
Paints our skies

Take me inside of you so I can climb your mountains
The very thought brings me peaceful bliss
Together we will seek to fill love's own fountain
With the rain in our hearts'
Streaming kiss

Neva Flores @2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 3:32 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Neva. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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July 11, 2011 at 9:12 AM
This is beautiful. So deep and creative. I love love loved reading it today. Congratulations on it being featured :)
Brown Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Neva. Love, Carol
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