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Let Me Take You

Let me take you into the rains which stream into my heart Show you the lightning flashing in my veins You can listen to the thunder as we stand a world apart Then I will bring you inside me To remain Inside of me you will find the silence of hills and valleys Places you can wander in peaceful bliss But you will still see that lightning flashing wildly Hear crashing thunder in the magic Of my kiss You can tell me about the rains that stream into your heart Show me the rocky mountains in your eyes Together we will stand watching rain clouds part As the lightening in our veins Paints our skies Take me inside of you so I can climb your mountains The very thought brings me peaceful bliss Together we will seek to fill love's own fountain With the rain in our hearts' Streaming kiss Neva Flores @2011

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Date: 8/2/2011 3:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Neva. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2011 9:12:00 AM
This is beautiful. So deep and creative. I love love loved reading it today. Congratulations on it being featured :)
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Date: 7/10/2011 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Neva. Love, Carol
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